When your nurse-turned-doula client has assisted in over 300 births and has almost a decade of experience helping mamas and parents in the hospital setting, it’s VERY easy to just let the numbers speak for themselves. But that’s not what Nicole Bradford is all about. Keep reading to learn how we put together her about page so that it not only highlighted her impressive (to say the least) experience, but also told her story, her way.
Raise your hand if writing about yourself is really, really hard? You’re not alone. Writing the about page for your website can feel a little bare-it-all-to-the-world vulnerable and also at the same time I-promise-I’m-not-trying-to-be-a-sleazy-car-salesman-just-hire-me-and-you’ll-see slimy.
Just a head’s up though, you really can’t be too sales-y if you’ve got the experience and the story to back it up and you want to make cash money from your copy. Enter Nicole’s story.
When Nicole reached out to me, she had a clear vision of what her business was supposed to be, what services she was willing and able to provide, and who she wanted to work for. It was just a matter of getting it all onto paper in that special way that connects and resonates with clients.
A girl after my own heart, she had written down a fabulous bio in an actual, real-life, composition notebook with a ballpoint pen.
Sidenote – I couldn’t recommend MORE writing first before you type. It’s amazing how much smoother your ideas will flow when you don’t have the pressure from the backlit, blue-light screen shining into your soul in front of you.
Anyway, with pictures of her bio and my trusty, never-fails, about page outline in front of me (this will be a freebie coming SOON, if you’re interested) I set off to write what is (not to brag) one of the most goose-bump inducing little stories I’ve ever written.
That’s the thing about about pages. You want your readers to feel. You want your readers to connect. You want them nodding along as they read your story, raising their eyebrows and letting out a little whistle when they read your experience, you want them to want more. Because when they want more, they convert more. And while telling your story is important, it’s not the goal if you’re selling a service or a product.
The goal is to use your story to create copy that behooves the reader without question to work with you. No ifs, and, or buts!
So, in the first section of Nicole’s About Page, we wanted to highlight one of the biggest pain points new and veteran moms feel in their perinatal journey, lack of autonomy and choice surrounding their pregnancy:
Once we addressed Nicole’s clients’ most painful and most prominent pain point, we told her story. That is the key to a good about page. Address your target audience FIRST, and then circle back to how and why you can help them. (Remember – the about page isn’t about you, it’s about how and why you can help your clients.)
Story told, check, goose-pumps present, check, and with heart on-sleeve, you’re led to Nicole’s and BATB’s mission.
Another note – your mission statement should feel like the closing statement of the presentation (re: your website) you created to sell your offer to your dream clients. You’ve given them an onslaught of information, and now it’s time to wrap it all up. Enter this mission statement:
Finally, and only after we’ve given the reader everything they could hope for in terms of drama, saga, and emotional collateral, we show them the numbers. Because if the reader / potential client still has any doubt as to whether your business can help them, the numbers wash it away. *This is also the place to throw some testimonials, if you’ve got them. If you don’t, go back to some old clients and ask for a few words, and save them in a bank. Your future marketing content will thank you.*
Finally, when it was all said and done, Nicole bestowed upon me just the kindest words that anyone could say after writing the hardest page on a website to write:
“Ellie helped me write my about page and she made it such a smooth and easy process. Talking about yourself and marketing yourself is never easy, but she helped me feel confident and get my story across with ease!”
In conclusion, your about page is more than just your bio; it’s THE place to share your story, connect with your audience, and let them know why you’re the right person to help them achieve their goals. Because of that, it’s the damn HARDEST to write. There’s just no way around it.
If you’re a mama or soon-to-be mama in Charleston, SC and need support before and / or after you give birth, reach out to Nicole today. You will be in EXCELLENT hands.
If you need support writing your own about page for your website (or any kind of bio) look out for my writing-about-yourself freebie coming soon or check out my Instagram for tips and tricks you can use right now.
And if you’d rather just have someone else write it for you (someone who is DYING to hear your story) fill out my contact form today!
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When your nurse-turned-doula client has assisted in over 300 births and has almost a decade of experience helping mamas and parents in the hospital setting, it’s VERY easy to just let the numbers speak for themselves. But that’s not what Nicole Bradford is all about. Keep reading to learn how we put together her about […]